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Post by iLeo on Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:20 pm

Walk around like you own the place.
Maybe if you acted right, I would've stayed.
All you do is annoy me, give me some space!
Turned me into your own little maid!

I don't know why I stayed.
Today I'm climbing out this abyss
This is how I fucking get repaid?
And make sure I won't be missed.

I will never let you control me.
All I felt was helplessness.
Tonight I will be free.
But now I'm full of happiness.
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I don't know why I felt like making a poem. I was listening to some Eminiem music when I wrote this poem.
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Post by Aaron on Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:32 pm

It's pretty good. It seems kinda angsty.

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Post by Luck on Wed Aug 22, 2012 5:53 pm

Leo what the fuck, you stole like 4 of those lines from Eminems song 25 To Life. LOL.
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Post by iLeo on Wed Aug 22, 2012 6:52 pm

Luck wrote:Leo what the fuck, you stole like 4 of those lines from Eminems song 25 To Life. LOL.
Lol I know, he inspired me.
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Post by Evan on Wed Aug 22, 2012 7:55 pm

Inspiration =/= Plagiarism.

And Plagiarism is taking another's work without identifying it as yours and passing it off as your own.

in case you were unaware.

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Post by Aaron on Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:47 pm

If someone inspires you like THAT, get in to karaoke.

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