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A Belt That Fits
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A Belt That Fits
It isn't easy specializing on one Pokemon Type, or so I've heard. Birds, Psychics, and Ghosts are the first problem. The second problem is me! Can I, a Goldenrod wimp, really become a Fighting Type Master? With an ex Police Rookie and amnesiac girl joining me, an obsessive Psychic rival trailing me, and while coming face to face with a group of poachers, can I really prove to the world that you don't have to be a meat head to train Fighting Types?! Of course I can, right?

Chapter Guide
Chapter 1 Life As We Know It
Chapter 2 Big Expectations
Chapter 3 What Revenge?
Chapter 4 Sleep My Child
Chapter 5 Stubborn Makes Two
Chapter 6 Hopeless Affair
Chapter 7 Dark Faces
Chapter 8 Ain't Afraid of No Ghost
Chapter 9 Sensationalism At Large
Chapter 10 Stripped
Chapter 11 Tying Winds Together
Chapter 12 Ruins of Conflict [New!]
Chapter 13 [10% Completed/TBR: ~4/8]
Reviews, comments and the like would great. I'd really like to know what you guys think!
New chapter posted on Sunday!

Chapter Guide
Chapter 1 Life As We Know It
Chapter 2 Big Expectations
Chapter 3 What Revenge?
Chapter 4 Sleep My Child
Chapter 5 Stubborn Makes Two
Chapter 6 Hopeless Affair
Chapter 7 Dark Faces
Chapter 8 Ain't Afraid of No Ghost
Chapter 9 Sensationalism At Large
Chapter 10 Stripped
Chapter 11 Tying Winds Together
Chapter 12 Ruins of Conflict [New!]
Chapter 13 [10% Completed/TBR: ~4/8]
Reviews, comments and the like would great. I'd really like to know what you guys think!
New chapter posted on Sunday!
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Intresting story you have there :3
Keep it up man , really good stuff
Keep it up man , really good stuff
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I loved it. And I don't read fanfiction. You make me want to write something xD

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Well uh, how do I put this...that was erm...pretty fucking awesome and a hell of a lot better than I was expecting especially for a fanfic (You know what with the trend of fanfics usually sucking more ass than a gay guy on poppers) But seriously keep it up man 

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Re: A Belt That Fits
The stories are beautiful, but I can catch grammatical mistakes and word misuse (e.g. considering Goldenrod's mass[ive] amount of people). I usually hate fanfictions but these were a lot better than I thought they would be. Can't wait for Chapter 5 


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Re: A Belt That Fits
Thats not an error. Mass describes the population as a whole, but massive is just a more modern term. Mass is still technically right.

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Awake said I can be the beta reader . So yeah , ill help him on catching some errors :p
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Mass = noun
Massive = adjective
You may be right, but I think mass is a noun, and doesn't make sense. I don't know for sure, but I thought it was like that.. 0_o
Massive = adjective
You may be right, but I think mass is a noun, and doesn't make sense. I don't know for sure, but I thought it was like that.. 0_o

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Re: A Belt That Fits
Chapter 5
New chapter! Thanks for the support guys. Leo's currently helping me out get mistakes, but if there are any errors that we both miss, please don't hesitate to post them!
Once again, thanks for the comments guys, it does mean a lot.
And as always, R/C is welcomed!
New chapter! Thanks for the support guys. Leo's currently helping me out get mistakes, but if there are any errors that we both miss, please don't hesitate to post them!
Once again, thanks for the comments guys, it does mean a lot.
And as always, R/C is welcomed!

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I'll help you if you still need it :3

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I wouldn't mind having two beta readers making sure I don't get any inconsistenxies and errors out on the actual release date. So if you'd like, you can be my second beta reader. C:

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Sounds nifty c:

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wut does r/c mean?

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Really great stuff. Good to see there are still some creative minds out here. I just had a thought. I could write my own Pokemon fanfic as well and once both our works our finished we make a collaboration story with the two protagonists from each one crossing over into one universe. But that's up to you.
And then not finish it, right?
Evan wrote:I loved it. And I don't read fanfiction. You make me want to write something xD
And then not finish it, right?
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R/C means Review and Comment, Tim. Even though sometimes I replace the Comment with Critique. :B
Thanks Qualna, that means a lot! Making a crossover at the end sounds a like a lot of fun, and I'd be really interested and be sure to read if you began writing a story yourself.
Thanks Qualna, that means a lot! Making a crossover at the end sounds a like a lot of fun, and I'd be really interested and be sure to read if you began writing a story yourself.

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